Ok so I did make some brief edits to the last little bit. Mostly that instead of specifically saying human kindness, he just said he believed in humans, and I also changed his expression to be a lot more confident as well instead of just angry for that part.

[@Zool] Also yeah, thanks! I'll admit, I was worried how it would look to anyone who hadn't wasted an hour and a half on it, so it's good to hear it was so well recieved.