[@leyroyjenkins] Please don't take the GM's rejection as some kind of judgment over your writing, either. Just because she isn't a fit for this game doesn't mean she's bad, or even uninteresting.

I'm not speaking from much of a pedigree, but to disagree with Noblebandit slightly, I believe that, at their core, interesting characters make interesting choices. The backstory merely provides context: who she is, who she [i]thinks[/i] she is, and what the reader will expect from her at face value as a result of that. The talented writer then deviates from those expectations, both in mundane or in story-significant ways, because she's not a trope; she's a person, and people surprise each other in some incredible ways.

I hope Morrigan ends up in someone else's RP because she [i]is[/i] (or, at least, can be) [i]extremely[/i] interesting. What is she gonna do once a sweet, shy boy begins to fall in love with her? How is she going to try to keep him safe with the organization chasing her down, eventually trapping her in a corner? Does she protect him (violently, of course), or does she protect his idea of who she is, the fake, normal [i]version[/i] of Morrigan who he adores?

I bet she wants to be alone because that sort of thing keeps happening to her, right? She always tries to fit in somewhere and someone, something, always screws it up; she's always forced to use violence to protect what she cherishes, or destroy what haunts her. What a shame that she can't control who she loves, or who loves her. Not without chasing him away.

And the worst part is, there's a time limit. So even if she did manage to make friends, a boyfriend, or even a surrogate family, ultimately it's a selfish decision she's made; because with the ticking hourglass which is her unstable genealogy, soon she'll be depriving all those people of a friend/girlfriend/sister/daughter. So does she "protect" even them from the heartbreak by keeping herself distant and aloof? Or does she make the ultimately selfish choice, and try to be their companion for the brief but beautiful time that she'd have with them?

Put her somewhere else, bro. She ain't much of a delinquent but she [i]will[/i] be special to someone. To you and to the others who get to meet her in another RP.

10/10 would read a manga about Morrigan