Alright. Here we go. Expect a PM within the next day with discussion points for your backstory. After that, I'll get the first post up. In the interim, I encourage to discuss and fill out your character relationships with everyone. You've been traveling together for a few weeks now, you should know the broad strokes. [@DrRtron] [b]Cadarn[/b] [i]ACCEPTED[/i] The only thing I ask is for his flaws to have more of a detriment to them. They seem like flaws that are not always bad but can be viewed as virtuous in a vacuum. [@Asura] [b]Aldwin[/b] [I]ACCEPTED[/i] It all looks good. And yes, you can give yourself that riding horse. I expect it to be named... [s]so it hurts more when I kill it.[/s] [@Rockette] [b]Lisotta[/b] [I]ACCEPTED[/i] I love me some superstitious Chasind. I'll make sure to take note and use that. [@Theyra] [b]Anselm[/b] [I]ACCEPTED[/i] Way to use that character-building economy to fence yourself some more foci. I'm kidding. While reviewing your sheet [I]I[/i] forgot how my own game worked. I as about to ask how alcohol could be an equipped item, but your CS does say he keeps it on hand. [@Auz] [b]Venatra[/b] [I]ACCEPTED[/i] Awe, yeah, scary Vashoth. I'm down. Just a small nitpick, to clean up the boxes by the attributes. My mean ole OCD wills it. [@POOHEAD189] [b]Rannon[/b] [I]TENTATIVELY ACCEPTED[/i] I know you mentioned the coding messing up on your sheet. I've fixed it and put it under the hider below. I like what I've seen on the sheet, but I need your "Specialization" area and the "Warden Rank" answered. Once you get that sorted, I think you're good to go. Also, you can put your character's animal companion (which I'm assuming is a mabari, the best boys) and mount underneath "Equipped." Technically they're there all the time. Oh, and clarify the type of armor he has on. [hider=Code][code][center][h1][color=9b8681] | [/color][color=gray]๐† ๐‘ ๐„ ๐˜ ๐– ๐€ ๐‘ ๐ƒ ๐„ ๐ ๐€ ๐‘ ๐‚ ๐‡ ๐ˆ ๐• ๐„[/color][color=9b8681] | [/color][/h1][ hr][sup][sub][h3][i]"To fight the Darkspawn, you need iron. The iron in your sword, the iron in your words, and the iron of your resolve."[/i][/h3][/sub][/sup][/center] [center][img]https: //i.imgur.com/sWhbJeZ.jpg[/img][/center] [ hr][sup][sub][h2]| [color=9b8681]๐‚ ๐‡ ๐€ ๐‘ ๐€ ๐‚ ๐“ ๐„ ๐‘ ๐ˆ ๐ ๐… ๐Ž ๐‘ ๐Œ ๐€ ๐“ ๐ˆ ๐Ž ๐[/color] |[/h2][/sub][/sup] [indent][indent]๐๐€๐Œ๐„ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Rannon Bryce[/color] ๐€๐†๐„ [color=9b8681| [/color] [color=gray]28[/color] ๐†๐„๐๐ƒ๐„๐‘ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Male (He/Him)[/color] ๐‘๐€๐‚๐„ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Man[/color] ๐Ž๐‘๐ˆ๐†๐ˆ๐ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Fereldan, Freeman[/color] ๐‹๐€๐๐†๐”๐€๐†๐„๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]The Common Tongue[/color] ๐–๐€๐‘๐ƒ๐„๐ ๐‘๐€๐๐Š [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Grey Warden (Acolyte for Mages) or Warden Recruit. I'll accept one Senior Warden as the group's leader.[/color] ๐‡๐„๐—๐‚๐Ž๐ƒ๐„ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]#9b8681[/color][/indent][/indent][ hr][sup][sub][h2]| [color=9b8681]๐‚ ๐‡ ๐€ ๐‘ ๐€ ๐‚ ๐“ ๐„ ๐‘ ๐€ ๐ ๐ ๐„ ๐€ ๐‘ ๐€ ๐ ๐‚ ๐„[/color] |[/h2][/sub][/sup] [indent][indent]๐‡๐„๐ˆ๐†๐‡๐“ & ๐๐”๐ˆ๐‹๐ƒ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Tall, powerful build.[/color] ๐‚๐Ž๐Œ๐๐‹๐„๐—๐ˆ๐Ž๐, ๐„๐˜๐„ & ๐‡๐€๐ˆ๐‘ ๐‚๐Ž๐‹๐Ž๐‘ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]With fair skin, he wields eyes of wrought iron and hair of brown oak.[/color] ๐ƒ๐ˆ๐’๐“๐ˆ๐๐†๐”๐ˆ๐’๐‡๐ˆ๐๐† ๐…๐„๐€๐“๐”๐‘๐„๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]A place to put down scars, tattoos, and the lot. You can also include horn shape and ornaments if you're a Qunari. Vallaslin if you're Dalish. Casteless markings if you're dwarven. Etc.[/color] ๐–๐€๐‘๐ƒ๐„๐ ๐Ž๐”๐“๐…๐ˆ๐“ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]He's clad in fine and tough leather over a chainmail hauberk, with sturdy traveling shoes and a worn belt. His trousers are dirt stained but still good. He dons his soldier's swordbelt and baldric, and upon his shoulder he bears the griffon of the wardens. On his neck is a silver necklace given to him by his mother. Beneath his armor is a linen shirt.[/color] ๐Œ๐€๐๐๐„๐‘๐ˆ๐’๐Œ๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]Rannon holds himself like a wolf. Alert, fierce, but with a noble quality to his bearing. He moves with a surety and confidence one only has after surviving extended combat and the ordering of men into war. But for all of his strength, he's still young, and when surprised he has a youthful brightness to his eyes. [/color][/indent][/indent][ hr][sup][sub][h2]| [color=9b8681]๐‚ ๐‡ ๐€ ๐‘ ๐€ ๐‚ ๐“ ๐„ ๐‘ ๐ˆ ๐ ๐ ๐„ ๐‘ ๐– ๐Ž ๐‘ ๐Š ๐ˆ ๐ ๐† ๐’[/color] |[/h2][/sub][/sup] [indent][indent]๐Œ๐Ž๐“๐ˆ๐•๐€๐“๐ˆ๐Ž๐๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]His motivations are as simple as the stroke of his sword. He hates darkspawn and traitors. As a member of the Greywardens, he can kill the former, and keep himself from ever being associated with the latter again. The deaths of his friends Aart, Gavin, Leopuld, and Rochen still haunt his dreams. He's nothing left save his duty and his rage.[/color] ๐‚๐€๐๐€๐๐ˆ๐‹๐ˆ๐“๐ˆ๐„๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][list][*]Honest [*]Loyal [*]Good Natured [/list][/color]๐…๐‹๐€๐–๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][list][*]Stubborn [*]Rough [*]Single-minded [/list][/color]๐•๐ˆ๐‚๐„๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][list][*]Alcoholic[/list][/color]๐…๐ˆ๐๐€๐‹ ๐“๐‘๐”๐“๐‡ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray]As long as I have breath, I will serve and I will slay.[/color][/indent][/indent][ hr][sup][sub][h2]| [color=9b8681]๐– ๐€ ๐‘ ๐‘ ๐ˆ ๐Ž ๐‘ [/color] |[/h2][/sub][/sup] [indent][indent]โ˜ ๐•ฎ๐–”๐–’๐–’๐–š๐–“๐–Ž๐–ˆ๐–†๐–™๐–Ž๐–”๐–“ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]-1[/b][i][/i][/color] โ˜’ ๐•ฎ๐–”๐–“๐–˜๐–™๐–Ž๐–™๐–š๐–™๐–Ž๐–”๐–“ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]+3[/b] [i]Stamina[/i][/color] โ˜ ๐•ฎ๐–š๐–“๐–“๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]0[/b][i][/i][/color] โ˜’ ๐•ฏ๐–Š๐–๐–™๐–Š๐–—๐–Ž๐–™๐–ž [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]0[/b] [i]Riding[/i][/color] โ˜ ๐•ธ๐–†๐–Œ๐–Ž๐–ˆ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]-2[/b][i][/i][/color] โ˜ ๐•ป๐–Š๐–—๐–ˆ๐–Š๐–•๐–™๐–Ž๐–”๐–“ [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]0[/b] [i]Detect Darkspawn, Smelling[/i][/color] โ˜’ ๐•พ๐–™๐–—๐–Š๐–“๐–Œ๐–™๐– [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]+3[/b] [i]Heavy Blades, Might[/i][/color] โ˜ ๐–‚๐–Ž๐–‘๐–‘๐–•๐–”๐–œ๐–Š๐–— [color=9b8681]| [/color][color=gray][b]+1[/b] [i]Courage, Self Discipline[/i][/color] ๐’๐๐„๐‚๐ˆ๐€๐‹๐ˆ๐™๐€๐“๐ˆ๐Ž๐ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=9b8681][b]Specialization[/b][/color] [color=gray][indent]Words[/indent][/color] ๐“๐€๐‹๐„๐๐“๐’ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=white][b]Command[/b][/color] [color=gray][indent]Novice [hider=Description]Your presence inspires your allies through battle cry, flag raising, or declaring a charge.[/hider][/indent][/color][color=9b8681][b]Animal Training[/b][/color] [color=gray][indent]Novice [color=9b8681]โ–บ[/color] Journeyman [hider=Description]Novice: You know the basics of dealing with animals. With a week of training, you can teach an animal to follow a simple one-word command like โ€œheel,โ€ โ€œfollow,โ€ or โ€œattack.โ€ You can teach a single animal a number of commands equal to your Communication. Journeyman: You can train animals to follow more complex commands, like โ€œguard this placeโ€ or โ€œreturn to me when strangers approach.โ€ Teaching a complex command takes two weeks of training and the total number of commands a single animal can learn is equal to your Communication +2.[/hider][/indent][/color][color=9b8681][b]Horsemanship[/b][/color] [color=gray][indent]Novice [hider=Description]Novice: You can jump into the saddle quickly. Mounting a steed requires no effort.[/hider][/indent][/color][/indent][/indent] ๐„ ๐ ๐” ๐ˆ ๐ ๐Œ ๐„ ๐ ๐“ & ๐ ๐„ ๐‹ ๐Ž ๐ ๐† ๐ˆ ๐ ๐† ๐’ | [indent][indent]๐„๐๐”๐ˆ๐๐๐„๐ƒ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray][list][*]Greatsword, Armor, Swordbelt, Horn[/list][/color]๐’๐“๐€๐’๐‡๐„๐ƒ [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray][list][*]Arming Sword, Round Shield, Helm[/list][/color]๐๐€๐‚๐Š๐๐€๐‚๐Š [color=9b8681]| [/color] [color=gray][list][*]Mother's necklace, Art's bracers [/list][/color][/indent][/indent][ hr] [/code][/hider] [@LadyTabris] [b]Mari[/b] [I]TENTATIVELY ACCEPTED[/i] I just need a brief clarification. Does your character have no specialization? Otherwise, Combat Magic isn't one that's listed. Also, you're short a spell on your list. And if you do wish to have a specialization, you can add that spell. If not, we can talk about your character having no specialization as of yet. I recommend Force Mage, if you're unsure, as they would be a good fit with someone wielding a weapon and out for blood. Just let me know.