[quote=@alexfangtalon] This seems very intriguing. [/quote] I'm glad you think so! If you're looking to apply, I'll be happy to have you. [@Yankee], no worries at all! The first thing that jumped out to me is that your image is broken, but if you remove everything after the .png in the link, it'll be good. As for the character...whoa. A strong premise to say the least. It's all too easy to imagine such tragic circumstances unfolding in such a manner, and that makes for an impactful story. Good work! To answer your questions... [list][*]The Shadow section is not necessary if you're planning for your character's primary conflict to be external. That doesn't mean there's no internal conflict, but the principle source of your character's foes would be another person or system [*]For Empress, I don't actually know about there being a connection to ice element myself, since the only Empress character I recall off the top of me head has the Psychokinesis element. I can tell you right now we don't have anyone specializing in ice though, so it's available [*]For Specialty, right now we have a good spread, so you're free to choose whatever you're like [*]Weakness doesn't need to be hard-coded. You could have an ice Persona weak to wind, or a bless Persona weak to elec. Your call[/list]