[quote=@Kyoka]
Does anyone have any advice for writing fight scenes?  I found myself really struggling and needing to rewrite and rethink a few times but still in the end feeling rather unsatisfied. Feel like it is rather hard to make it flow naturally and had difficulty in thinking of what should go where or if there should be dialogue in some places or none and so on and so on...


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I think Cruiser makes a good point. I also think it's worth thinking about the fight the same way you would a fight in any visual medium - why does the fight matter? What story can you tell with the fight. Odds are that Superman and Martian Manhunter, despite their similar skillsets, fight very differently. Figuring out a way to navigate that, to make the reader (and yourself.) visualize it's very important. Difficult and exciting.

Excruciating detail isn't always neccesary. You don't have to detail every punch, kick or slash. But you should probably begin by establishing the particular fighting style of the characters, before you lose the detail.
As for dialogue. Yeah. It belongs in the fight. No good fight really happens without some dialogue put into it. Regardless if it's exposition or a quip. 


[quote=@Enarr]
The picture for Jason & Roy looks like shipper fan art and it pleases me to high heavens
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Dude, my posts are just going to be them making their way to hatefucking.