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[@sassy1085] I'm sorry, I truly don't mean to be rude or anything but if you'd like to fill out your character more as well as proofread them I'd gladly look it over again.
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I knew you were going to say something like that. I wasn't sure how long the paragraphs was supposed to be in the CS and seeing that Pasche CS was short, I thought It didn't matter