[quote=@TruthHurts22]
[@Wayward] I appreciate the effort put into the writing of this, it's really something. That said, the flowery nature of the sheet is, uh, leaving me with a few gaps in description for the character.

For one thing, the Powers section. No problems with the actual powers he's got, but instead I wanted clarification on what you wrote in the Dive section. Are you saying that Liam's version of the dive can be of a potent enough nature to fully 'damage' a person's psyche without the prerequisite of the Dive occurring? Is this just a default thing that can happen, like he's a speeding bullet, or is it a thing he needs to consciously do?

Then there's the History section, which is missing a couple of key points - namely, what Liam's use of Diving was and the consequences of it. The way you wrote it makes it come across as if Liam only reflected on himself after he Broke and hadn't actually used the power. There'd be no reason for the ESP to capture him if he hasn't done anything, you know?
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Ah. OK. All makes sense. 

In terms of his Dive's function... if it can ben worked in the way I'm thinking, I would consider it in terms of his entering of peoples' minds results in less of a full immersion and more of a "pop the door open, throw something inside that goes boom and get out." Only Diving in a short ways, if you will, and focusing his psychic power to briefly disrupt another's mental state; I reckon it would be akin to causing a power surge in a person's mind, a telepathic equivalent of an emp. Or am I completely missing the point of Diving?