[@Cyclone] for Yudaiel
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Your sheet is verbose to the point of excess, but at least you had the decency to put in those little quote things for a tl;dr. I didn't actually read the whole thing so my criticisms will be superficial, but they are as follows:

Starting with aspect, time shenanigans? You know this one so often turns out poorly...you may have to kill off your own god a la Vowzra. Moreover you took heavy inspiration from the Dune books, and didn't even bother to hide it! Look at that musical theme! Pah, at least you don't have [i]true[/i] time travel or time loops or paradoxes or anything that could break the continuity of the story too badly...wait a minute, "...changing the past is an incredibly dangerous folly, and [i][b]likely impossible[/b][/i] too..." Gah, I see you with your if's, but's, maybe's, and possibly's, a toe still wedged in there trying to hold open the door! You play with fire taunting us so, fool.

The personality section mentioned that she sometimes gives false prophecies is a hilariously meta commentary about shifting OOC plans. Why can't she just give non-cryptic and accurate prophecies all the time? Also, if she wants to kill crazy people, how can she also seek to befriend the other deities who are allcrazy? Get your stuff straightened out!

The true form is thematic and awesome! I couldn't have thought of any better myself. This is high praise coming from the Cyclone! Well done indeed.

The sheet passes muster, but it's a painful an acceptance as any. Go ahead and put it on the characters tab, before I change my mind!
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