Another one? I thought my work was done! [@Zurajai] for Lares [hider] Quite a solid sheet and one worth the wait! I am left with some (mostly innocuous) questions though. The first thing that struck me is that you've chosen to name your god Lares -- are the individual house spirits that you've mentioned on the Discord going to share that same name, or get a new one? Or are they all one and the same as manifestations of the god Lares rather than as some sort of extraordinary species distinct from him. Another thing that I'm left to wonder is if these house spirits (and by extension Lares himself) are going to be concerned with the 'homes' of the other deities. For instance, is the Monarch's palace suddenly going to get a spirit to pop up? If Yudaiel creates the moon and mostly hangs out on it, might it eventually be acknowledged as 'hers' enough to the point that she gets a space alien house spirit showing up on the moon with her I think it'd be quite entertaining if the answer to both of those is a 'yes', and suspect that will indeed be your response. If so that'd assuage the only real concern that was expressed by we GMs: namely that as a god so reliant upon mortals you might not have much to do for a while, at least this first cycle. But if you build various houses or abodes for Lares himself or even just in anticipation of mortals eventually finding and claiming those places, that could be interesting, and likewise for these first few pages you might be able to interact with the other gods if they make abodes of their own. So the aspect is overall quite interesting, unique, and full of potential. There's still plenty of grey area for what constitutes a home but that's probably intentional on your part, and likely unavoidable regardless, so there's little that I could even suggest changing except to perhaps clarify with the answer to my above question concerning whether all of that applies to the other deities as well and to what extent. The personality part makes sense and is well written, as does the part about the curious animal forms that he likes to adopt. I will note that a god's true form is supposed to be quite dangerous for mortals to encounter, though the reason for that could take many different forms; we've already seen a range from blindness and/or a fiery death afflicting any mortal who encoutners the form, to nearby mortals being worked to death, to Yudaiel's touch inspiring insanity or otherwise just destroying the mind of most (and instead awakening prescient powers in a few). Now there have been a few other sheets that we accepted where the true form was meant to be an exception to this, and explicitly not immediately deadly or otherwise harmful to mortals who briefly come in contact, so your true form isn't too off base. Just note the theme that we were going for and either conform to it by adding some dangerous effects when Lares is present in his 'wind of change' state, or else I suppose you too could clarify that he's meant to be an exception in that his presence isn't as dangerous as most of the rest. Sheet's happily accepted, and again, looks quite good. [/hider]