[quote=@ERode] [@Izurich] Looks good! Just to clarify though, while Lucretia may treat Schwarzritter as a friend, automatons aren't actually a thing, so it'll be more like playing with a doll rather than playing with a pet robot thing. What does this drone run on though? I'm presuming electricity, mainly because it seems to be a more complex construction than something that'd just run on gears and such (which would make a steam core more viable as a power source). You can mention that it incorporates Peizogravitas (a common Formulization of a copper alloy that makes it hella buoyant when electricity runs through it) in its construction too, to make it easily transportable. Like I mentioned with Robo's crystal idea, Lucretia will be able to adjust the Schwarzritter's output on the fly with Formulization, but if she wants to change its functions, she'll have to spend time workshopping it. Also, Schwarzritter will be effectively disarmed at the start of the RP, with its weapons (and basically every other students' weapons) stored in the armory/testing grounds of the island. They'll allow militant-minded students to continue to perfect their weapons of destruction, but not bring it outside of specified grounds. [/quote] Nice! That went better than I thought it'd be. Alright, noted, made the changes and additions to the Ferromancy section of the CS, those are in [b][i]bolded italics[/i][/b]. [hider=changes] Schwarzritter takes the form of a curious T-shaped floating drone that's capable of a number of things. It can be used as a personal transport, portable storage, mobile cover, and weapons platform. Its strength and endurance are the equivalent of an iron golem, its central body had slots to store items in, and its two 'arms' contain an automatic assault turret each. [b][i]It's installed with a Peizogravitas formula to enable buoyancy using electricity gathered from the global wireless electric network.[/i][/b] When not in use, it can fold itself into an inert backpack-shaped object, surprisingly lightweight, making it convenient to carry around. Furthermore, although its definitely not a living creature, Lucretia considers the drone to be her closest friend, she often talks and refers to it as if it has a mind of its own, [b][i]like a young girl playing with her doll... except that it's made of metal, and many times her size, and capable of deadly force.[/i][/b] [/hider]