[@SgtEasy]That’s some good fucking food. Anyhow, the only real correction to make is that the Edenic Beasts don’t teach [i]how[/i] to perceive the Formulae of intangible substances, but rather work to supercharge your ability to perceive instead. It’s very much a gift that changes the way you view the world, as opposed to like, just special training/knowledge. That’s why a big portion of being a Dynamicist that HASN’T been favoured by an Edenic Beast is like, being ridiculously talented and lucky.

[@Vega7285]Cute to think of parties in terms of RPG, when the only real parties out here are social events filled with enough innuendo to cause a flower garden lass to faint from the debauchery.

[@Dog]Still missing dat appearance, dude.

[@Jumbus]Tragically, the implication behind Mesmerology in the OOC is that there’s not a single Mesmerologist in the world that can actually do what they claim to be able to do, as the very nature of this particular Major works against the most difficult parts of Formulization in general, due to requiring you to essentially alter the properties of the intangibles (memories/thoughts) of a living being (which is difficult enough to do when it’s yourself). The hurdle to Mesmerology is high enough that everything about it is theoretical and there’s no systematized method of actually attaining it. So a school that can produce Mesmerologists (that aren’t just scam artists) is out of the question. Either find another Major, accept that Franz is lying through his teeth, or make him a real genius of geniuses.

Otherwise, the backstory is good enough. You’ll want to talk to Dog about how Austira-Hungary exists when the Ottoman Empire also does. Qualia isn't anything relevant to the world though.