[quote=@Saryylyss] Oh. my. gosh... Those diary entries are amazing! I know it sounds silly, but I love reading the way people feel about my character. I am really excited to see how Sulhana's dynamic works with her sisters. This feels like a fantasy version of the Bennett sisters from Pride and Prejudice. [/quote] I agree [@SereneDoge] the diary entries are great! I love the insight you’ve pulled up about each of the suitors, I also agree [@Saryylyss] I like reading other characters thoughts, it creates a different dynamic to them too than what they actually say.