Alright, [@Sigil], I should finally be done here. Nothing more serious to edit. Grammar checks out, and I've included everything vital to present the PC properly. If I do anything else, it'll only be way later and likely only be expanding his "Extras" section and maybe smoothing a couple things over if better wording occurs to me.

As is though, 100% complete!

As for the story itself, I'm really enjoying these PC intros so far! The only one I haven't gotten around to finishing yet is Victoria the Bard, but the opening paragraphs of that one are actually pretty funny. XD