[quote=@Guccicorn] Yeeey, that's certainly good to hear, and that's what I was going for. I guess I was just worried that the particular min/max way that I'm looking at her powers might have loopholes that could be op. I was tryna walk that line with her being tough against the effects of her powers, but not actually 'tough' tough. NOW [s]QUESTIONS[/s] ANSWERS: 1) Oh, I forgot, I'm renaming her 'The Streaker' lol, no, I don't think she's a nudist, but this was intentional. I think I saw like a clip of the flash where he was talking about having to make a suit that would stand up to the wear and tear of moving so fast, and I really liked that idea, it made him seem more like he had day-to-day problems. I also like that gear can be a way of like leveling her abilities as the story progresses, because she doesn't really know how to homebrew anything better than her current uniform of a racing skin-suit and lightweight running shoes. I also worry that being able to take object along into time dilation is just like a buncha questions and probably op :P This makes me git creative. 2) Nono, you aren't overanything, I was trying to sound fancy with her limitations. Basically I wanted to make it clear that she can't stop time, or if she can, she becomes useless instead of like super OP while doing so, like ant-man going quantum small. I hope that clears stuff up, I gotta go eat but I'mma try to finish my backstory and post tonight! [/quote] No worries! Yeah, I think you did a good job with balancing, super speed is good but by itself it isn't going to beat extremely powerful enemies. I think the answers to your questions were good for the purposes of addressing my concerns; maybe edit your CS to add that information and that part will be good. I look forward to reading the rest of your CS! By the way, I'm going to try posting the first post on Thursday night or Friday of this week. I'm not going to close it at that point, but it will be much harder to join after that, as I will have to think of a good way to get your character into the story. So if you have not done so already, I encourage you to get your CS in by Thursday morning so you'll have plenty of time to make changes as needed.