[@Dog]

First of all: I really, really like the quirky and conversational way that you wrote this. 

Second of all: it's a good sign that I'm doing this here, instead of in a PM. I only critique publicly when the problems are very mild.

Honestly, all I really need from you is [i]more.[/i] I don't care about sheet length (my own sheet is hilariously short) but it feels like there's a lot of vital stuff missing here. You mention that the Federal Union conquered an alien civilization: when, how, why? And if you are going to include aliens, I also need those talked about somewhere. What do they look like? Who are they? We know nothing about them but their species' name.

Also, you've talked to us about how (wage) slavery was a component of your nation, but I don't really see that reflected here.

We've discussed in Discord how sheets here are pretty mild. That's true! But if your nation has something special about it- aliens, wage slaves- then you should still describe that special thing. So if you can just fill those missing sections out, I can approve you and you can get posting :)