[@Moon Man] I really like Eugene. A nosy reporter is the bread and butter of the Cthulu mythos, so Eugene will fit right in! There's some housekeeping, and behind the scenes stuff that needs to be sorted (and I'll be sending you a PM shortly to get that started), but so far, Eugene gets a big tick. 

[@sassy1085] While it is good to see Rosanna making her theatrical return, the character sheet is (marginally) changed from the first edition of the roleplay, so you'll need a little bit of tweaking to get Rosanna up to code. Beyond that, I'd also like to see a more concrete fear than 'life after university'. Sanity (and therefore insanity) plays a pretty big role in the Cthulu mythos, and I plan to use these fears, as well as your character's backstory and experience, to pile on the terror. As terrifying as life after university is, it's not something I can necessarily use! If you need some pointers, take a look at the example character sheet I provided, or simply ask for some more suitable examples. Once those two fixes are sorted, let me know, and I'll have another look over. 

[@Eviledd1984] Much the same as above. The character sheet is a little different, so you need to make the relevant changes before I can give him a tick. On top of that, there are two areas where I'd like to see a little polish (if you'll pardon the pun). Using character images can really help bring a character to life, but in Benjamin's case, I think it's a little confusing. Not only is Humphrey Bogart famously one of the shorter leading men to grace Hollywood (5'7" vs Benjamin's 6'2"), but more importantly, he is in his 40's in the character image, so considerably older than the 27 he is supposed to represent. Either age up Benjamin, or find a more age appropriate character image. The second thing is the traits. The alternating green/red positive/negative not only looks more eye-catching, but it also makes it easier for me to check the sheet at a glance, but that's only a formatting issue. The traits themselves, I don't feel that having racist and misogynistic as traits makes for particularly enjoyable roleplaying, or distinct enough traits to form key parts to a personality. Considering the time period this roleplay is set in (the mid 1920's), racism and misogyny would unfortunately be common-place, so I'd like to see more distinct character traits. Once these issues are ironed out, let me know and I'll read through again.