Hm... those are some small paragraphs you've got there. Though, that blue scarf... it's Trevor's isn't it? lolol. It's kinda funny that one of my characters in the RP currently going on in that other forum happens to have the same thing under the 'appearance' section, just replacing Gavin with his name and Shinx with Noibat. Either way, I would like to have seen some longer, more descriptive paragraphs... some of those are only a sentence or two long.