[quote=@RezonanceV]
Thanks, I am glad it fits with the aesthetic, I really vibe with your setting [@TheMerlin]. As for the minor changes with abilities, we can discuss them here. It might be helpful for those still building their characters.  
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Y'know what, that's a good idea. Anyways, like I said, it's just a few minor things. A matter of semantics really regarding the abilities Precognition and Dispel Magic in particular.

So for Precognition, anything to do with time is going to be a bit iffy, because it's not really covered by any type of magic for the roleplay. Could make a case for Psionics with their telepathy, but that'd be reading their enemy's mind to predict their next move, not looking directly into the future. Same effect, I know, but different means.

In Griff's case, might I suggest changing it to 'Enhanced Awareness' or something like that? Projecting ki in an aura seems to be his thing, so maybe we could say that he can feel the movement of every little thing inside it before it reaches him.

As for Dispel Magic, the wording of its description seems to imply that he'd be able to no-sell any kind of mana based attacks thrown his way and maybe I'm just misinterpreting, but either way it could be an issue. Perhaps change Dispel to Disrupt and say that when in close proximity to a mage, he can give them like a 'shock' of ki which disturbs their focus enough to mess up their magic before they can use it. Sort of like a stun effect. 

Anyways, that's it for Griff. Since you managed to write up a whole other CS while I'm writing this response, I might as well address it too. First of all, I just wanna say... you stole my idea! How [i]dare[/i] y- just kidding. Actually, I'm kinda relieved coz I had a lot of clashing ideas for my 2nd character. and since you beat me to writing a full CS, that narrowed it down some. Anyways, everything looks fine. It's just the abilities once again, or just one in this case.

So off the bat, no teleportation allowed. At least not as a magic ability. Could be equipment based, but not magic since it's not covered by telekinesis or telepathy. I like the anchoring to a position part though, so maybe just change 'Teleport' to 'Anchor' or something like that? Say that he uses telekinesis to sort of latch onto a surface and be able to hang off from walls and ceilings.