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[@ShadowSunRisen] In the name of the Twin Gods and by judgement of the House of Loyce, the Archdukedom of the Mistlands is bestowed upon the Great House of Engelhardt, Counts of Nassau and Lords of Okenovo! May you rule with justice and serve with loyalty. 

(Only two things that need to be changed is their recent adoption of the Adandion language and their neutrality. All great houses known Adandion for purposes of pure practicality and have since they were given their titles a few centuries ago, just like how French or Latin was the language of diplomacy for most of Europe regardless of where a king or noble came from. Although there is a solution that only recently there's been a push for Adandion Language in the wider populace of the Mistlands, especially in the more remote places. The second is a lot more minor but there is an expectation that a Great House is going to declare support for someone. You can keep it neutral if you really want, the main point of it is so that OOC starting out there's less hemming and hawing about whose on whose side.)

Also, everyone whose posted ahead of you also have been previously discussed, the second review here is since that the sheets were made before I had everything properly laid out so its here to catch things that might have otherwise slipped as well as generally taking another look.
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Sure, I'll get on those changes after I eat dinner. Thanks for the acceptance.