Let's see if I can shake off my RPing rust. Give it to me straight and let me know what I need to fix or if I misinterpreted anything about the setting.

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[color=gold]Name[/color]: Tesni Edris
[color=gold]Age[/color]: 17
[color=gold]Nationality[/color]: Wales

[color=gold]Personality[/color]: A somewhat selfish and flighty girl with a unique outlook on right and wrong. Tesni hates people who commit wrongdoings but rely on the rule of law to protect themselves, in short hypocrites. This has led her to be labelled a delinquent and a no-good troublemaker by anyone with a semblance of actionable authority. Unsurprisingly the bad name given to her by people she has no respect for have done absolutely nothing to dissuade her from running into buildings with a lead pipe and ruining ‘bad guys’ days if the situation calls for it… or sometimes if the situation didn’t call for it because of personal philosophy.

Tesni vehemently disagrees with the idea of being a hero and instead believes in ‘being kind’ or 'doing kind acts'. There is being kind by helping someone with their grocery bags and there is being kind by punching an asshole in the nose and Tesni’s brand of being kind leans greatly towards the latter. Plus being kind gets compensation of some kind, being a ‘hero’ gets you nothing. If someone was being cynical, you could say that her ‘being kind’ is an excuse to be violent, but if you were being generous, it could be read as she simply lacks the temper and patience required to not get involved in others business.

She has no issue teaming up with other magical girls, but they might have an issue with Tesni's methods. As subtle as a hammer and twice as dense when it comes to combat, Tesni has a simple belief that if you can use pure blunt force to solve a problem then it's not really a problem, is it? Perhaps if Tesni was more flexible in her thinking, the more esoteric and mystical powers of her grimoire would be available to her.

[hider=History:]Becoming a Magical Girl wasn't exactly something Tesni stived for. In all honesty she felt that if the world were truly peaceful then there would be no need for something like The Grand Ministry to exist, but regardless of her personal beliefs the fact is she became a Magical Girl.

In an ideal story, one worthy of becoming its own Grimoire, it would have been a dark and stormy night with dramatic lightning and a horde of Pageless threatening to devour her when she defiantly stood in their way to save a stray cat or some orphan preschoolers... 

Instead it was a bland overcast afternoon, the kind of day where you knew it wasn't going to rain so it left the day with this muddy, lackluster, feeling about it. The kind of day that felt like it sucked up all the colour in it. It was on this disgusting looking day Tesni was in the middle of getting her ass kicked and thrown into a back alley by three older students. Each one had individually had their own asses kicked by Tesni and in their shared humiliation had decided that she deserved to be taught a lesson. Maybe Tesni did deserve it, after all is there anything more fragile than a high schoolers ego? And she had thoroughly shattered it for each one of them. Exposing the shameful, despicable, things they had done that they wouldn't even dare tell anyone. But her greatest sin of all, was not being strong enough to handle the fallout of what they did when they felt they had nothing left to lose.

So Tesni was being beaten up in an alley, like an NPC who gets saved as part of a tutorial battle in an RPG. While the students were getting their kicks Tesni couldn't help but cackle and laugh as she looked behind them. It was the Pageless slowly crawling down the walls of the building, and out from under dumpsters. Tesni didn't know the name of them then, but latter on she supposed that they must have thought the story of "Girl who exposed villains then was found beaten in an alley" was a good one. One of the students looked back before screaming and running off, another quickly following. The last student was a rich kid at the school and was the one that frankly hated Tesni the most out of all of them, so before running off she grabbed a pipe from a nearby dumpster and swung it down on Tesni's leg.

Tesni couldn't stop laughing even as the pain brought tears to her eyes. There was no chance of running anymore so she reached up towards the lead pipe and held it tight. Jamming into the ground she pulled herself up and braced against it.

"Talk about no good deed going unpunished... well, I think I can manage at least one more good deed today~" Tesni wasn't sure if it was the pain in her leg, but her mind was shockingly clear and so... she swung the pipe.

Over and over again, the hollow pipe whistled through the air, the clanging percussion echoing through the air as the pipe struck the ground, or the wall. Each swing was getting heavier in her hands, but... she was swinging it faster as if the weight was meaningless. Pageless that were previously being harmlessly knocked away her suddenly evaporating at the touch. Tesni started moving, not even feeling the injury in her leg, almost dancing down the alley the pipe glowing with a golden light before ringing out as she slammed it to the ground, no longer echoing out that hollow clanking sound. Stabbing the staff into the ground, Tesni instinctively pulled on the staff and is stretched, lengthening and pulling her skyward as the last Pageless was escaping. Kicking the staff beneath her and using her grip on the tip as a pivot point, Tesni swung the staff around it an overhead arc, slamming the staff down upon the Pageless... and 'accidentally' pancaking the front of a nice sports car owned by a certain rich kid she happened to know.

"Well, I guess I'm the punishment for their good deed~"[/hider]

[hider=Grimoire:]
[color=gold]Title[/color]: Journey to the West
[color=gold]Classification[/color]: Legend Rank
[color=gold]Description[/color]: Journey to the West has been adapted and retold so many times that most everyone has heard some variation of the story. In its most simple summary: Sun Wukong the Monkey King is tasked with escorting Tang Sanzang on his journey westward to retrieve original Buddhist scriptures. Along way many trials are overcome, often involving demons and Sun Wukong defeating them.[/hider]

[hider=Abilities:]
Ruyi Jingu Bang: A iron pillar that was gifted to the Monkey King and was originally used to measure the depths of the oceans in time immemorial. Weighing 17,550 lbs (7,960 kg) and able to change its size at the wielder’s whim, often the size of a toothpick for convenience. 

"Fiery-eyes Golden-gaze": Allows Tesni to identify evil no matter what form it takes; however, it also causes smoke to sting her eyes if used for longer that five minutes at a time.

Cloud Trapeze: Able to ‘ride’ or ‘swing’ on clouds. In theory this should let Tesni fly. In practice all she can manage at the moment is a double jump.

Enhanced Strength: it’s a necessity… 17,550 lbs is very, [i]very[/i], heavy

Hand-to-hand combat: Despite being called a 'magical' girl, Tesni is very specifically built for close combat.

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