[quote=@Dark Cloud]
[@OddApproved] Done, I believe...

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Change provokation to provocation, please and thank you. 

[quote]Hand-to-hand Combat
From a young age the king was taught to fight with a axe in hand, or a sword at his side. While not a master in the art of swordplay Yolaf is quite skilled with the axe, knowing the finer points of the weapons usefulness in the thick of battle.[/quote]

This ability would be considered Weapons experience or Mastery of an axe, etc... Change from Hand-to-hand combat to weapons skills, proficiency, or something. 

Everything looks good other than that! Once those are changed, you will be approved.