[@Zoldyck] I like the loyalty to King Colyt II aspect! The only thing I want to point out is the "lack of feudalism", I know the real life historical inspiration you're going after though so one idea I had is that maybe Gelderecht was more feudal but between having to put down revolts and getting on the Mad King's bad side, a lot of nobles ended up dead so now its more in a transitory state because its lost so many noble houses and now having to find a new way to stay stable. Also I would probably tone down the industrialization a little bit and bring up the farming capacity a bit more, even the capital is only so industrialized and the Crownmark does have decent farmland all around. Could be something Elise works on on the side during the RP, working towards increasing clothier workshops or something by trying to import more wool from the North/West to pay for more soldiers or gain the wealth for recognition. Would work well with the "transitory" state mentioned above. [@Cohors] Just checking you're okay with playing two characters. Also, Elay's current husband is just an NPC right?