Not bad, but the bio is somehow troubling since most of this is what will be done in the IC! So if you plant to use this character redo the Bio so it speaks about her life in general, not what she done during the Arrival. [quote=gamer5]We will start by an introduction post, which will follow the day of the characters up to a few minutes to the start of the shower at their longitude (in Chicago this would be a few minutes before 11:22:51 local time). Then we shall proceed to the bombardment, getting to a safe place and finally the aftermath scenes. Until this point you can even have and use a temp character that will be disposed off in the aftermath. After the aftermath we shall proceed onwards until the part at which humanity or is defeated, manages to hold off the aliens or eradicates them all from the face of the Earth. That will mark the end of StarFall The Arrival and the start of a continuation RP![/quote]