[u]Your 'Dream' has been added to the 0th post of the IC![/u]

[@Fetzen] Describe the breaking point that led Quavanir to leave his home (like what Miranir did specifically). Give me a bit more on his outlook and motivation, and while I don't mind you mentioning the message from the gods, I prefer a full section of that before he was called. Just so we know him completely as a person. Also please provide and quote, and make him [i]slightly[/i] smaller in stature. Also let me know why his family lives in Cyrodiil. I'll also need at least two specific contacts with relationships as well. Preferably 3.

[@Shu] The history is good, but it switched quickly from childhood to eighteen years old. Maybe add a bit between there. And I would like to know how or why her mother was taken by vampires, and why they told Colyne they were vampires who took her. Also describe (in small detail, not much) why she would travel to any of the other provinces like skyrim or hammerfell on her 'travels.' I'll also need at least two specific contacts with relationships as well. Preferably 3.

[@Dark Cloud][@ArticBeaver][@Atrophy][@darkwolf687] How are the characters coming? It is now past the due date, though I'll give a small buffer since a few people need to edit their CS's.