[@Artemis Arts]
So the app is pretty good. What definitely needs expanding is the history section. I should have mentioned this in the first post, but I am looking for two to three paragraphs for the history. What definitely needs to be covered is their origin, what they did during the whole SHIELD-Hydra reveal, and how they joined the Avengers. You can cover any other history you think is relevant.

Also for the supporting cast, just include a sentence for each character on how they are relevant to Captain Marvel. If you do that you character will probably be accepted.

[@Eviledd1984]
This is an interesting take on Spider-Man. The only issue I have is like with Artemis Arts, could you expand your history section. It should cover at least his origin, reaction to the Hydra reveal, and how they joined the Avengers. Other than that you are good.

Also is Mary-Jane still around? I noticed she wasn’t included in your supporting cast. And I appreciate that you included May Parker. I am currently reading the old Spider-Girl comics and I really like the character, so she will probably show up as an NPC in this RP.

[@Ultimate Spidey]
I love Blink, so she’s great to see in this RP. All that is needed before I approve her is for you to add what she did the SHIELD-Hydra reveal and how she joined the Avengers after it. But other than that it’s a great character sheet.

Now to edit the first post to mention the history requirements.