Alright, two more reviews here.

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Wow, what a richly detailed sheet, [@darkwolf687]! 

Right of the bat, the attention to details in just the spells section is incredible. Of course, covering 556 years of life alone is a daunting task, yet you have accomplished that and told a superb story through your character's background. It is clear Dalnoria's personality is shaped through more than five centuries of personal growth, family affair and historical events. Despite having experienced so much already, she still has room to grow. Finally, her skills and flaws connect nicely with her background, and they are very much relevant to her deity.

Dalnoria is a well fleshed out character. She is [b]approved[/b], unless [@POOHEAD189] says otherwise.

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[@LadyTabris], your character looks good so far; just need to add a bit more!

Lucretia Caedus can serve the "blank slate" perspective of the group due to her relative youth. At the same time, she has unique personal motivations and brings a valuable skillset. Since she is younger, a shorter sheet is perfectly fine. However, before Lucy is accepted, her background and flaws need some elaborating. Notably, what are the dreams and visions she's experiencing, and how does she react to them? In addition, how is Lucy connected to Dibella and/or Dibella's domains.