[quote=@Dark Cloud]
[@Lewascan2] I'm gonna have an easier time with Ascent than I am with everything else.
[/quote]

For me, it's not that the Ascent itself is a difficult concept to explain, merely that it feels like it is the part that MUST be given due detail. It's the most significant and recent event for the character, and it just feels wrong to gloss over the details. Honestly, I've stripped away about as much detail as I can stomach by this point. All that's left is to figure out more efficient wording.
By this point, comparing my CS to other sheets that have had no complaints on length, I think I'm good now.