Good to see you here, [@MacabreFox]! First things first, what's the secret password?

You've adapted Rhona well to the setting. This iteration of her is distinct from the previous, yet, it keeps a lot of the core concept that makes her relatable and open to growth. Her background is pretty solid; it connects her tumultuous childhood to her becoming a faithful of Arkay.

Rhona's appearance and personality could be expanded further. Some details regarding her leather clothing and steel armor would be nice. For motivation and outlook, what is her view of Arkay? What's her knowledge of Tamriel at this point, and how does she feel about recent and current events?

Rhona should be good to go after these elaborations, unless [@POOHEAD189] has other suggestions. I can already see her being a fantastic addition to the RP!