[@Fractured] Hmm, I see, I see. I did notice that overall style, but it's a pretty steep adjustment for me to go all the way immediately. I'll look into getting closer to that state of "security camera", but interjecting personality is rather important to me as a writer. I don't keep my character's personality in my head. I actually tend to shape it within the narrative. I'll try to adjust a bit more, but I wouldn't expect that stuff to flee my writing completely. It's just far too ingrained.