Alrighty, here's my initial CS. What do you think? Anything I need to change on this? [hider=Hideaki "Hide" Saitou, Agumon and Viktor][u][b]Human:[/b][/u] [b]Name:[/b] Hideaki Saitou [b]Age:[/b] 19 [b]Appearance:[/b] Hideaki Saitou was always raised to present himself in the best way possible at all times. That said, he is not nearly as concerned about his appearance as his parents would like him to be. However, he does seek to make a solid first impression and tries to maintain himself to the best of his abilities. He attempts to maintain a "proper" Japanese student look. His hair, a deep black in hue, is styled to the side and curved a bit toward the side of his face to keep it way from his eyes. He often wears his typical school uniform: a blue jacket with white lining with darker blue streaks up the sides where the arms usually fall, as well as a pair of rather simple-looking black pants. Beneath this jacket, he usually wears a simple, collared white shirt and a black tie with a blue streak down its center. He makes sure that he does enough exercise to keep himself fit and healthy, but he does not actively attempt to physically improve himself at all. This leaves his build as rather average overall. [b]Personality:[/b] Hide is an intellectual and strategist that does his best to maintain a polite, "proper" demeanor. He tries his best to keep cool and level-headed, no matter what situation he finds himself in. He even bows his head or upper body when he must apologize to somebody or to show his gratitude. This also means that he is largely reserved, keeping himself and his own emotions in check while maintaining an outward appearance of professionalism. His overall goal is to appear friendly, approachable and unjudgmental, largely due to a desire to help others with problems that they might possess. However, due to a desire to prove himself to others, he is also a bit of a perfectionist, and this leads to a strong lack of desire to make mistakes. This can lead to him becoming very indecisive when an outcome is something that is difficult to predict, or when there's simply too many variables to consider. [b]History:[/b] Hideaki Saitou, child of the married partners of the "Reversal of Fate Law Offices," always lived a rather sheltered life. As his parents owned a very successful law firm, they were always quite well off. However, this did to lead to one small issue for him: He was being funneled by his parents into their career, and since he was being homeschooled by private tutors, he didn't even have other kids to learn from that this wasn't necessarily what he had to do. As a result, he dedicated most of his life to his studies, and other relevant skills. He was also taught to maintain professionalism in order to make sure he never did something embarrassing in public. He quietly and obediently did as his parents instructed, even as the work began to pile on him and become rather overwhelming. His schedule was usually so jam packed throughout the day of a combination of studying and physical activity to keep him fit and healthy, that he barely ever had any time simply to himself. The only thing that got him through this these days was his interest in chess, which he could play online at any time through a specific program. This was the one game they tolerated him playing, since it helped him hone strategic skills that would help him in the real world. Little did he or his parents know that this game was going to be the turning point for him. Once his parents realized that allowing him to play this game with others was actually helping him develop, they leaned into this rather heavily. One day, they ended up purchasing something for him--an Omniphone running the "Silver" system--one day when they decided that they needed to go on a business trip. At this point, they trusted Hide to keep to his usual schedule, and departed, leaving him on his own at the house, with the occasional tutor showing up for whatever lecture they were to give him that day. The hope for this gift was that he would no longer be locked to a desk in order to play chess with people online, on top of now having a far more reliable method of communication with them while they were away. However, in their haste, they failed to account for one problem. With this amazing new device in his hands, Hide was no longer confined to his home and nearby locations. With awe in his gaze at every new discovery, Hide would spend a lot of his time scanning the Internet instead of playing chess, and eventually, he found something that intrigued him. A concept for monsters that lived in the digital waves of today's society, Digimon. The concept fascinated him, and he dug deeper into this in particular, finding old videogames, merchandise, and even a collectible card game of sorts. He nodded to himself and, for the first time in years, abandoned his studies in order to make his way to a local store and acquire some of these products for himself; luckily, he had been very frugal with the money he'd been making on the side from working for his parents' law firm. He bought a few things, most notably a few boxes of trading cards, and brought them home to open and play around with for a while. After a while, he decided to take his next step. He had been hesitant to buy something that he'd need to maintain over time thanks to his busy schedule, but his curiosity was simply too strong to ignore. Eventually, he couldn't help but buy himself a pair of Digimon toys, a Digivice: and a Vital Bracelet V-pet of his own. When his parents returned, however, they were not pleased with his lack of progress. They decided to double down on his schedule, but he still found time to enjoy his newfound hobby. And thanks to his extra time working at the firm now, he was able to save up enough money to replace his Omniphone with a more updated model that was recently announced.... [b]Other:[/b] Due to his experience with the game of chess, as well as reviewing games from the Digimon TCG and putting it into practice with his own deck, he has a very tactical mindset. He is a skilled strategist, but usually only when there's plenty of time to think about his next moves in advance.... He also has developed a fondness for Fighting games, though he simply watches them and would never play one himself; they're just too fast-paced for him. But the thoughts and strategies that must be going into each player's every move began to fascinate him. [hr] [u][b]Digimon:[/b][/u] [hider=Agumon] [img]https://wikimon.net/images/6/67/Agumon_cs.jpg[/img] [b]Stage Type:[/b] Warp Digivolution [b]Personality:[/b] + Brave and altruistic, ready to jump into harm's way for the sake of another at a moment's notice. + Strong sense of self confidence! + Honorable, and takes his promises very seriously; he will never back out of a promise if he can avoid it. - Extremely rash/impatient; he does not like to waste time thinking, when the problem could be solved faster just by punching it down. - Obsessed with fighting to such a degree that he has a difficult time connecting with others through any other medium. - Very hotheaded and egotistical; prone to angry outbursts if insulted. [b]D.N.A.:[/b] Digivice: toy was the first real piece of Digimon merchandise that Hide could call his own. Since he took such a late interest in Digimon, this was what caught his eye at the time, and was all he could get under the table so that his parents wouldn't find out. During the fusing with his Omniphone, the device took Hide's downloaded videos of old Digimon videogames for him to watch in secret on his own time (most notably the Rumble Arena games), as well as footage of him at school putting together his first ever Digimon TCG deck, based around Greymon lines. In addition, however, was Hide's personal journal that was locked through a password, in which he talked about his stresses, and his desires for every person in the world to be treated with fairness and equality. [b]Other:[/b] Agumon does little more than fight and train; if he has interests in other areas, he has not bothered to explore them, and is instead focused on dedicating himself to becoming the strongest Digimon. [b]Digivolution Line:[/b] Fresh: Botamon - Bubbles: Spews bubbles from his mouth In-Training: Koromon - Acid Bubbles: Spews bubbles with slightly higher acidity - Tackle: Tackles the opponent with his entire body Child: Agumon - Pepper Breath: Flames emerge from his maw and he spews a fireball toward his foe - Claw Uppercut: Swings a clenched claw to strike the opponent with a forceful, flaming punch Adult: GeoGreymon - Mega Flame: Unleashes a short-range, but large and strong torrent of fire from his maw - Mega Volcano: Takes a moment to charge flames in his maw, then unleashes it in the form of a huge fireball that explodes on contact. Perfect: RizeGreymon - Trident Revolver: Aims a trio of flaming blasts from the revolver on his arm. - Barrel Blow: Smashes his revolver arm onto his foe with all of his power. Ultimate: WarGreymon - Terra Force: Gathers energy between his claws over his head, converting it into a large, flaming projectile that explodes on contact. - Great Tornado: Raises his arms overhead to join his Dramon Destroyer Gauntlets together and spins like a drill into his opponent. - War Driver: Charges power into his Dramon Destroyer Gauntlet before bringing it down with one powerful strike. The longer it charges, the harder the hit. - Shield of Courage: Uses the Emblem on his back wings to form a shield in front of him for defense. Super Ultimate: VictoryGreymon (Jogress with Magnamon) - Trident Gaia - The central blade of his Dramon Breaker sword is removed, and then the sword "shell" attaches to one of his wrist gauntlets. Energy is then absorbed from his surroundings and gathered within the blades before being fired. - Dramon Breaker - Assembles the Dramon Breaker sword and attacks with it - Victory Charge - The Dramon Breaker glows with accumulated energy, and then it is swung in order to deflect a projectile attack. - Victory Shield - Thrusts one of his gauntlets forward, and a shield formed from accumulated environmental energy emerges to block an attack. [/hider] [hider=Veemon] [img]https://i.ibb.co/kxvhCXb/Veemon-Resized.png[/img] [b]Name: Viktor[/b] [b]Stage Type:[/b] Warp Digivolution [b]Personality:[/b] + Chivalric front, behaves in a very knightly manner. + Very chauvinistic, especially with Hide and his goals. + Puts the well being of others before himself, due in part to a belief that he can handle anything better than others. - Massive superiority complex, coupled with a love for showing off. Especially for the ladies. - Is not afraid to do whatever it takes to achieve victory if he can avoid getting caught doing it, no matter what trickery this might involve. - Very antagonistic to those that he doesn't approve of; especially his rash companion, Agumon. He only stops (temporarily) when Hide tells him to. [b]D.N.A.:[/b] Vital Bracelet Digivice V V-Pet was the most recent Digimon-related purchase Hide made, due to the fact that he could hide it as an exercise monitor and healthcare product. Veemon's data is comprised mostly of Hide's schoolwork, his schedules, as well as records of his online chess matches to study for his own self improvement. [b]Other:[/b] Veemon loves to mock what he sees as Agumon's "idiocy." He gets a bit of a thrill out of antagonizing specifically Agumon due to his reactions, and especially enjoys taking opportunities to mock Agumon's battle prowess in some way. [b]Digivolution Line:[/b] Fresh: Chibomon - Acid Bubbles: Spews acidic bubbles from his mouth In-Training: DemiVeemon - Hop Attack: Jumps into his opponent, delivering a headbutt. Child: Veemon - Vee Headbutt: Suddenly lunges forward at a great speed, bashing the opponent with his skull. - Vee Punch: Spins his arms around to build momentum before throwing that momentum into a single punch. Adult: ExVeemon - Vee Laser: Fires an energy blast from the X across his torso - Spinning Lariat: Spins his entire body around to throw his arm forward to smash into an opponent with increased momentum Perfect: Paildramon - Desperado Blaster: Unleashes a barrage of energy blasts from his waist cannons. - Cable Catcher: Punches an arm forward and his claws shoot outward, attached to cables which wrap around and constrict an opponent, limiting their movement and damaging them at the same time. Ultimate: Magnamon - Magna Blaster: Armor glows with energy, which then accumulates in his claws as golden energy orbs and then fires them toward the opponent - Magna Burst: Armor glows brightly and then explodes with light energy around him, causing damage to everything within melee distance. - Magna Kick: Rushes forward at an incredible speed to deliver a devastating kick backed by his golden Chrome Digizoid armor. - Aura Barrier: Emits a forcefield of energy surrounding himself to block an attack. Super Ultimate: VictoryGreymon (Jogress with WarGreymon) - Trident Gaia - The central blade of his Dramon Breaker sword is removed, and then the sword "shell" attaches to one of his wrist gauntlets. Energy is then absorbed from his surroundings and gathered within the blades before being fired. - Dramon Breaker - Assembles the Dramon Breaker sword and attacks with it - Victory Charge - The Dramon Breaker glows with accumulated energy, and then it is swung in order to deflect a projectile attack. - Victory Shield - Thrusts one of his gauntlets forward, and a shield formed from accumulated environmental energy emerges to block an attack. [/hider][/hider] My initial idea was for the Ultimate forms to Jogress into the Super Ultimate form, where WarGreymon is the base and gets upgraded with Magnamon's golden armor and power of light to empower WarGreymon's already-present ability to gather environmental energy. And that the Dramon Breaker being a perfect representation of the two combining their powers, with WarGreymon's Dramon Destroyers making up the blade and Magnamon's golden armor making up the hilt and modular components of it~ But that's all running on the assumption that these Digimon are fine to begin with, so I'll wait and see what you all think xD