[@Hammerman] Man, you should say when you've made the changes. I just noticed when I read the sheet again. Anyways, accepted. Also, nice choice. [@Restalaan] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/474x/7d/c3/fb/7dc3fb831a7897422cba8f774a352266.jpg[/img] Character looks good, but you just need that one 'thing' in the sheet. [@AzureKnight] All accepted as soon as you also handle that one detail. [@Dark Cloud] Uhh, when I said make your character's past 'mysterious', I mean actually a mystery not only to Sam but also to us the readers. Like I said previously, the Demon Lord will be [i]extremely[/i] interested in the birth of a monster boy such as Sam. Cursing and exiling him for uselessness is plain madness for an in-character Demon Lord. If I may make a suggestion, you can have his backstory as simple as Sam wandering for as long as he could remember. For some reason, he has forgotten his childhood, his parents and where he came from. Which makes him motivated to actually find an identity, somewhere to belong in the world or even a way to recover these lost memories.