[@Randomness] While it wasn't mentioned on your CS, I would be fine if N'vui were white-souled. Normally plants, animals, and other non-sapients wouldn't have [i]enough[/i] of a soul to be considered an Inheritor, but you would obviously be the exception.

They remind me moreso of the Mokolé from Werewolf the Apocalypse. They're the were-lizards/crocodilians/dinosaurs/dragons that possess a genetic memory that stretches back to the age of Dragon-Kings (ie the Mezozoic).

Anyway the idea is fine I just want to make sure it lines up with everything else alright.

[@King Cosmos] I do like this character... and I think it works in overall concept. I just have a couple of things I'd like to work out better. How is she gaining spirit power? Is this something anyone can do if taught, or is she being imbued by spirits somehow? What is her motivation for mastering basically every spirit power? Is there a distinct focus that her powers trend around? Again I'm not crazy about this "easy immortality" among percievers.

The beginnings are there this just needs some more work.

[@yoshua171] Just to start I want to say that I'm not into having two characters in one sheet. There is another character that's a three-in-one, and you can refer to my notes on that for how I would prefer that sort of thing.

The length of the CS is another issue. [@Lewascan2] is definitely right, because the simple fact is that I'm a very busy person, and prefer to avoid wasting people's time with ideas that I won't like. Having a cut-down CS also makes it clear to me what's important to how the player wants to write the character, and makes it clear what is fluff.

I can also say right now that you're going to need to massively trim down their world's concept. Having their own "multiverse," worlds, gods, cosmology, reincarnation, all of that is 1. unnecessary because we're already playing in a pretty grand cosmology with its own rules for that sort of thing and 2. won't really be the focus of this RP.