[quote=@Dead Cruiser]
[@King Cosmos] I do like this character... and I think it works in overall concept. I just have a couple of things I'd like to work out better. How is she gaining spirit power? Is this something anyone can do if taught, or is she being imbued by spirits somehow? What is her motivation for mastering basically every spirit power? Is there a distinct focus that her powers trend around? Again I'm not crazy about this "easy immortality" among percievers.

The beginnings are there this just needs some more work.
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I've made a few changes to her sheet; hopefully it clarifies a few things. I'll summarise things here though.

Her abilities can be learned by anyone, technically, though most who try to do so fail. The idea behind the power of the spirits was that it came more from a better understanding of the world more than any innate abilities they might have; being more [i]in tune[/i] with the world I suppose. Her teleportation ability, which was the first one she learned, is probably the best example. She's not teleporting exactly, nor is it super speed; it's more like a wormhole I suppose, the bending of space so that her current location and her destination are right next to each other, achieved by simply recognising that distances are irrelevant and that your destination was always right next to you. The more I think about the more I think she's basically Neo experiencing the Matrix for the first time; 'there is no spoon' and as soon as your realise that you can jump over mountains too. I included some dialog in her backstory between her and the fox spirit she met first which goes into that a little.

That dialog also expands on her motivation a little, shows how it was the first spirit she met that set her on that path. It's honestly pretty simple though; she doesn't like having barriers around her. She doesn't like having things kept from her. At first it was the walls and rules of her city keeping her from seeing the world, then she made it past that and found another barrier, that being the knowledge that the spirits could teach her that had either been kept from humans or that they denied themselves. The further she travelled and the more barriers she crossed the more she found, until eventually she makes it to the top of the world and finds one final barrier keeping her from ascension. I suppose I'd call it a villainous bend on a sense of adventure, the possessive desire to see and experience everything and to have everything be within her reach.

I've tried to give some clarity on the kind of powers that she uses most often, the ones that will make up her main kit; if that's still not clear I'll just rewrite that whole section. I changed her agelessness to be more like a static appearance though; it was mostly only there to explain why she still looks like a twenty year old when she's in her fifties anyway. I've made it so that she will still die of old age, she'll just look like a young woman when she does.