[quote=@Warwick]
I edited It a bit! How Is It?
[/quote]

I like it a lot. I especially like the tone of it, it's upbeat and unique, to say the least.

I don't have a problem with approving it. I just want to make a few things clear in case they were skimmed over in the rules, since I did see you try and post earlier before approval:

Characters speak in first person, like I am now, and actions are communicated like this.
*Writes an action line*

We do keep in-character content to the IC tab and out of character discussions like this to the OOC tab here. One of the more strictly enforced rules, as it maintains immersion.

When directly responding to someone's character, we use the guild's "Quote" feature. Makes it easier to see who is talking to who at the high post speeds we hit sometimes.

Other than that, unless anyone else has anything they wanna add, I say welcome aboard! We'll keep an eye on ya and try to help guide you onto our style of things, because again, we treat Myriad Reality as much more of a game than an actual writing exercise written in the style of a novel you'd buy in a store, as is the standard on the site here.

Edit: Some of us have multiple accounts, to keep certain characters' interactions consistent and show them as our avatars. I am the same person as Audacious, and several other accounts.