[quote=@PKMNB0Y]
[@Izurich]: Well, I won't be doing any official acceptances before we get the RP up and running in a proper OoC, but I can give a quick preliminary review. 

So, I think the big thing to note here is that the main cast will [i]not[/i] be part of any government agency for the sake of being able to move about freely between nations; that's the purpose of the skybase in the intro section here. It conflicts a bit with the backstory given, though, so I'd like if you could rework the sections pertaining to that. All of the characters would have been scouted out roughly 6 months to a year prior to when I plan on starting, if that helps any. 
[/quote]

Nice! Honestly I’m pretty surprised that it’s only the backstory that needs addressing, since I literally had no prior CS to cheat off :P. 

Ez enough, I can change it to Pyra not being scouted by the government, but instead by the skybase’s authority then they convinced her to join the group. A year should be good, yeah. 

I’ll poke you again once I’ve made the changes to see if it fits what you have in mind.