Hi, thanks for feedback!

So to address the problems, I have done the following edit:

1. To remove the conflict with the world canon, I removed the detail about the mouth. It is now only mentioned that she got infected, without the details of how etc. This change had been given a strikethrough for ease of finding.

2. To remove the conflict with the world canon, detail about time and duration had been removed. It is now only mentioned that "eventually an offer came" and that "some time had passed since training started". This change had been given strikethroughs for ease of finding.

3. Reworked the Gunner skill. This change had been bolded for ease of finding.

4. All "Chi-Frame" had been fixed to "Chi-Mechframe".

Aaaand that's it. Please tell me if further fixes are necessary!