[@Jarl Coolgruuf] I liked the CS! Biography wise, the only thing I'd say needs to be changed is him knowing other people have powers. The people whose powers were "awakened" weren't really visible until the fight with Thundercloud. It's a small detail though, so I'm not too worried about it.

As for his powers, as long as he isn't instantly OTKOing supervillains with his strength, I think it'd be fine. I like the lack of control, it makes things interesting. One thing to clarify though, how much defensive ability does he have?

For the most part though, those are fairly minor clarifications/changes. I think it's a good CS and with that clarity I'll be able to approve it.

[@Mintz] I like your CS! If his power ends up being underpowered, I think there's a lot of room to grow, and Whitley could become a strong waterbender-esque character in time. I'll go ahead and send you the link to the Discord, welcome aboard!

[@Jarl Coolgruuf] [@Mintz] something to think about is what your characters were doing the night Thundercloud attacked. I don't think it makes sense to retcon your characters into the Thundercloud fight, so it's just something to consider.