[@FalloutJack] okay, so I have to reject the CS for a few reasons. They are as follows: 1) That superpower is very OP for the setting. Yeah he has only a little control over it, but supposedly something that can destroy everything around him was able to be restrained by him in a few days, so I wouldn't expect that to last. This guy sounds like he could take out someone like Thundercloud instantly and this is meant to be a story about rookie heroes with weaker powers who are growing. E.g. someone with super speed still got severely injured in her first fight. 2) Also, the mental conjuring of explosions seems too close to Kestrel's ([@threetoads]' character) power in any case. 3) The biography strikes me as over the top. This is probably more subjective and I'm not trying to be insulting, but the impression I got from it was "wow I'm so special look at me." 4) The meteor was a big local event, but it wasn't one outside of Lafayette City. I suspect that this might not be the right RP for you. Again, I'm not trying to be mean, but just based on the general tone of the ideas you've had thus far (this CS and the time manipulator) that you'd have more fun in a RP where the PCs are more powerful. We had someone else in this RP who didn't enjoy having to deviate from the idea he had for his CS and in the end it wasn't a fun experience for him, so I'd like to avoid that sort of bad experience for you if at all possible. If I'm wrong, let me know, but if not I'm not offended and I wish you the best in your future RP endeavors.