Alright, here's my CS. Feel free to tell me if I need to change something. [hider=Danny] [b]Name:[/b] Danny Orville [b]Superhero name:[/b] Raptor [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Race:[/b] Experimental human [b]Age:[/b] 18 [b]Appearance:[/b] Danny Sports short blond hair, neatly cut and finely combed, as well as sharp green eyes. He's quite tall for his age, sitting at around 6'0, though he slouches a little to make himself seem smaller. He dresses well and usually has a relaxed and easygoing expression on his face, though with his sharp gaze, his angular face, and his well defined cheekbones, it can make him look like a hawk on the hunt. It's not intentional, but Danny's looks have gotten him into trouble on occassion. [b]Personality:[/b] The once sickly teenager is a far cry from how he was in the past. Danny is usually calm and collected, but is also approachable and easy to get along with, as he's usually all smiles and jokes. Seemingly in spite of his easy attitude, he spends a lot of his time alone. When focused he's extremely sharp and can be quite competitive, like a honed blade, but as soon as the match is over, he quickly comes back down to his jovial self. He's usually free to talk about anything and everything, but when it comes to talk about his background, he seems to run out of words. Though he's quick to reassure everyone that everything is perfectly fine, it's obvious that Danny doesn't want to talk about it too much. In spite of his easygoing demeanor, he sometimes shows he's quite a lonely person. Perhaps he wants to distance himself from normal humans to protect them from the fallout of his hero activities. But with a few good friends and some heroic colleagues, perhaps there's a way to fix his oneliness after all. [b]Power:[/b] Danny was injected with the blood of a velociraptor while he was young, allowing him the ability to partially or fully transform into one. Even without transforming his senses are much sharper than normal humans, sight and smell being especially heightened. This is doubly true after his transformation. His reflexes are also better than normal, almost being able to react to things before they happen. When transformed he gains superior strength and speed, as well as access to a velociraptor's tail and bite. He can use his claws to climb some walls and leave vicious wounds on his foes. [b]Weaknesses:[/b] While Danny's strength and power are enhanced by his abilities, his stamina has not kept up. It's somewhat better than average, but the extreme physical feats his transformation is capable of take a large toll on his body, and it's impossible for him to maintain peak performance over a long period of time. Furthermore, transforming has its own issues - a partial transformation (such as transforming his hand into a claw) is very quick, but a complete transformation requires concentration and will take a moment or 2 to complete. This moment can be crucial, so he has to carefully consider the situation before he transforms. And while his reflexes are increased during his transformed state, this can sometimes work against him as his body reacts before his brain does. In general he acts more on his instincts than on his mind while in a transformed state, which can make him seem more bestial and aggressive, and it can take a lot of effort to revert his form. If he gets buried too deeply in the mind of the velociraptor, he might not come back at all. [b]Limitations:[/b] While he's usually easy to get along with, there always seems to be an invisible distance between him and his friends, or anyone for that matter. He has quite a wide circle of friends and aqcuantances, but in spite of this, he's always been a bit of a lone wolf with a tendency to go at it alone. He has a tendency to take the biggest risks for himself, which can make it seem like he has issues trusting people. [b]Skills/Talents:[/b] Danny is quite stealthy when he wants to be, and is good at ending up in places he probably shouldn't be in. He's also quite good at sports and can quickly pick up a new one in a day or two. Finally, he's a good liar with an excuse for every occassion, a trait that has helped him out of many jams before. [b]Background/bio:[/b] Danny Orville was born to a loving family with several siblings. Unfortunately, he was born quite weak, and no one was sure he would even make it past childhood. His parents, however, were unwilling to see their child die. A pair of brilliant scientists, they quickly made a breakthrough to save their son's life. Injecting him with the blood of a dinosaur, Danny made a miraculous recovery. Afterwards he did as any normal boy would do. He went to school, made friends, played sports, and studied hard. There was no need to do so much, his parents assured him. Being alive was good enough for them. But Danny wanted to do more for them. In order to pay back the love his parents have given him, and to enjoy every moment of his new life, Danny spends the nights roaming the streets like a vigilante, fighting the injustices that he sees, while attending a prominent high school in the city. He intends to make the most of his new life, and he will not sit by and let the new coalition of evil shatter his family's peace. [/hider]