[quote=@The 42nd Gecko] I haven't really gotten to that part of your post yet, as I'm trying to ponder how Bonnie wouldn't break down crying and run away after hearing this line. [color=DAA520]"Unfortunately, despite your impression to the contrary, not a one of us placed upon this team is friends, or even often comrades."[/color] [/quote] Well, I could reword this part specifically. But I'd hope to be able to do it without altering the rest. Unfortunately, I can't think of many good ways for Camelot verbalize that the team isn't friends without letting Bonnie realize that's what she means. Camelot's typically kinda blunt. She believes in confronting these issues honestly, especially when politeness isn't on the table as much. Edit: Edited that bit to be less brutally direct. Let me know if that fixes the problem.