[@dragonpiece]

Okay, so I like Ingrid quite a bit. Below is my feedback. 

1) [b]Personality:[/b] I dig it. I get a clear vision of what she is and what she's like. Remember caps for all traits.

2) [b]Character Appearance:[/b] I like the little details in here. Awesome job.

3) [b]Languages:[/b] Well explained and makes sense. As a side note, learning one language within a family (Avincian, Belzaggic, Inipori, Drudgunzean, Eskandish, etc.) makes it easier to learn the others.

4) [b]The Gift:[/b] To quote, "Her [i]current[/i] RAS is 8.4" Just an FYI that RAS is kind of an immutable thing. 8.4 also puts her in the range of being a true prodigy. I might remove the 'current' and just pay a bit more attention to how exceptional that RAS score would make her. There are no more than a couple hundred people in the entire world with RAS scores that high. I also like the way that you handled her dive into Atomic. It's nice to see someone making an atomic mage who isn't an idiot. As an aside, at some point, just give me a list of her official primary, secondary, and tertiary schools of magic she'll me focusing on at the academy.

[b]5) Background:[/b] Digging this overall. I like the conflict between motive and reality and how that'll have to come to a head sooner or later. In terms of that brief mention of her family's past struggles, I might leave out the literally 'starving'. They're nobles after all. They were probably humiliated and broke, but not the point of literally not having enough food. Maybe they just had to - *gasp* - cook for themselves or eat 'peasant food' or even... skip some meals. Just having to worry about food supply would literally be humbling.

[b]6) Motivation:[/b] Thumbs up here. Idealism mixed with some doubt.

[b]7) Inventory:[/b] Love it! Remember to delete my original text at the end there. Also, 'Neskal' as opposed to 'Neskel'.  

[b]8) Strengths & Weaknesses:[/b] looks good and makes sense. Just double checking that 'capable in a bow' means she can bow/curtsy well?

Overall, well done. Feel free to make those handful of small adjustments and post her in the Characters tab! Welcome aboard.