[hider=Response to Amaryllis Backstory] [@Guardian Angel Haruki] Alright, a Sign in the Stars; we can work with that. That works out pretty well actually. I'm big on 'Open Secrets' for the table, so I prefer sharing things like this with the room so folks know to work around each other and collaborate, so here's what I have in mind for the Hermit Discovery based on what you put here- but it also goes with a slight adjustment to the backstory, so let me know if you're cool with this. [quote=Recent History; The Heartlands] The Heartlands lie alongside the high ridge of the southern edge of the Dale, a verdant forest sprouts and was once tended by the Wooden Ones in a gentle fashion- but a Rot has set in there, decay gripping a place that was once fertile and wholesome and warping it into a shadowy place tainted by a vile taste in the air. The Wooden Ones who lived there have cut off contact with the rest of the world, and there is a dissonance in the dialogue of the Everbloom- the Heartlands are utterly abandoned, and those who enter rarely return. [/quote] This is what I'd written for the 'recent history' of the Heartlands, so Amaryllis' isolation and time of study works quite well here. She'd have been planted and tasked with her study and learning; (This is my suggested add-on) but after a while her isolation would have become true; the visits from her mother and father would have suddenly ceased, and she would have been left to her own devices to witness the slow decay of the wood around her as she finalized her growth and continued her study of the stars. This unnatural rot that was spreading through the wood would have been a very direct and personal thing pushing her to go and find outside help; if she tried to explore around or seek familiar faces she would have been met by what to her would seem like madness and violence. In short, she would be made to flee the Heartland and seek aid. As for the discovery in the stars; Someone in her position, studying the heavens for such an extended period of time and witnessing the movement of the stars, her Great Discovery would be that some of those stars are moving. A key constellation has shifted ever so slightly, drifting across a lifetime, into a new shape. Something shorter lived creatures would never have noticed, but something strange and unique to your circumstances. The Constellation in question is called 'Renyo's Gateway', and it is said to be the heavenly path to the home of the Gods. It resembles an arched gateway, but Amaryllis has seen strange drift in its shape. As always, [i]DM Cackling[/i], You Have Family [sup]TM[/sup]. [/hider] [hider=Response to I'Rajith's Backstory] [@Vertigo] This one requires little thorough response from me; I like it. I can work with a theatrical and good natured crime group operating in secret and at odds with other groups in the Dale. You earn a mere [i]DM Cackle[/i]; You Have Family [sup]TM[/sup], for your details are easy to plug into just about anything. [/hider] lmao I accidentally bopped my own CS thread, dang quick hands.