[@Siber] Your character feels very D&D, I guess you played it before? :P The Background is mostly Ok, but there was a few things I wanted to clarify with you. [list] [*] Apart from Sand Elves, Elves mostly stay within their forests so there is little chance Elven Archers would protect Euphoria. Most likely, it would be half-elves. There are a few Elves that left Mica and Yeryn, and a population of half elves across Edanica, but it is unlikely that this close to the borders of Mica you'd have elves living outside. :) [*] That part of Edanica is scarcely populated. It would make sense that Euphoria lies close to the coast, to the West. Most likely, tourists would refer to people traveling by sea to and from Malia, and stop there in the way. [*] So, Lunara is your chosen God correct? As per the edit made to the OOC, part of the chosen God's essence will be inside of your character. Just wanting to make sure! [/list] [@Assallya] Hey! The character's backstory is mostly fine, with plenty of details for me to use later. Like you already mentioned it could had a bit of polishing, but it's a detail. There are only two things I am worried about; [list] [*] Evil alignments generally makes me wary. They can be fine if played well, but an "Evil" character is someone that like to hurt others and innocents for no reasons and take pleasure in it, for example. It could be someone that's cruel and with zero empathy - so they generally make pretty poor companions. This is why I am double checking to make sure this is what you wanted / mean when you picked Evil? If you want someone with no rules that is generally pretty selfish and lacks empathy, you're looking at Chaotic-Neutral. Evil are generally Demons, Devils, etc and creatures like Bugbears and Goblins that revels in hurting others and killing. [*] I also just need to make sure your character falls in with the others in that she is imbued with the divine mission to complete the mission and stops the prophecy the gods sent them on Edanica for. Despite her generally more selfish nature, even the evil gods of the Pantheon agreed to make their own Envoy work on this with the others! [/list] [@TheWendil] Not a lot to say here, we had already discussed much of the finer details through PM. [@Guppy Franz] You perfectly encompassed the feel of Nuniel's Empire I was going for in your descriptions of the Battlefield. I love it. Arthur seems pretty balanced and apart from a bit of polishing and colours that could be added to the sheet itself, I don't see any inherent issues with him. [@Sleeth] Unique idea, which I like. Being an Undead have some implications to it, mainly the opinion of the people you will meet along the journey and, possibly, keep the fact he's an undead hidden from most of them. From your Background, I feel like your character and [@Guppy Franz] 's could have already met before, on the battlefield :^). [@Rune_Alchemist] Good description, plenty of details and a bit of divine confusion. I also do not see any inherent issues with her. [@PigeonOfAstora] I found it weird that you picked Eros at first, but it does indeed fit with the Loyalty part of him. So she comes from Brudel, is that correct? Also, I see you specialized in counter spells, which is all fine, but I suggest you also have a few offensive options. There won't always be casters among the enemies, so I recommend al casters have a few offensive options. :P [@Click This] Directly inspired from Fire Emblem's Pegasus Knights. I think it was in Path of Radiance that there was a Kingdom with an order of Knights - I loved it so much. Many years later, here we are. Feel free to send me your CS! And that is about everyone so far I think. Now that I took the time to properly re-read everyone's sheet thoroughly, I feel like the time is coming where I'll make the final roster choice. I will wait a bit for people to edit their sheet one last time and for [@Click This] do possibly post their characters. I think if everything goes well, the final roster could be picked by Saturday and the IC could start this week end!