[quote=@FrogRFlowR] [@Siber] Your character feels very D&D, I guess you played it before? :P The Background is mostly Ok, but there was a few things I wanted to clarify with you. [list] [*] Apart from Sand Elves, Elves mostly stay within their forests so there is little chance Elven Archers would protect Euphoria. Most likely, it would be half-elves. There are a few Elves that left Mica and Yeryn, and a population of half elves across Edanica, but it is unlikely that this close to the borders of Mica you'd have elves living outside. :) [*] That part of Edanica is scarcely populated. It would make sense that Euphoria lies close to the coast, to the West. Most likely, tourists would refer to people traveling by sea to and from Malia, and stop there in the way. [*] So, Lunara is your chosen God correct? As per the edit made to the OOC, part of the chosen God's essence will be inside of your character. Just wanting to make sure! [/list] [/quote] I [i]may[/i] have 4ish years of D&D experience... let me hide in the corner in nervousness... 1. That makes sense! Will edit! 2. Again, that fits, editing... >-< 3. Lunara is the chosen God(dess?). I thought I at least edited that in for more clarity... [i][Insert player grumbles][/i]