I know character discussion might not be welcome here, but typing it out and conveying it to others helps?

I agree that the 'fear' part of Menda should go, considering the premise of "Magical Girl". Would it be too cliché for her to be based on the legend of the phoenix? As it seems I will need to find a different grimoire - or, if I am to keep the same grimoire, lower her power to Fable and try and interpret the powers differently than the villainistic approach that I seemed to have taken. I have a fable that refers to the concept of luck and good fortune, that is another alternative.

I am 100% okay with scrapping any parts of the sheet that you two would please. I am not well-versed in fairy tales/legends/myths, besides obvious ones such as Cinderella, Hansel and Gretel, Rapunzel, etc.