[@DeadDrop] Cool concept. Got me thinking of all those Top Gun: Maverick trailers that the YT feed has been spamming me. What you can do is to add a little bit about Robert's reputation as an Aeon, generally. And then, maybe something about his time in the Navigation Division—just to expand the Chronicle just a little bit. A strong mix of Fire and Earth spirits would work for what you describe as the destructive side. That is, this mix would entail a more molten/lava kind of fire, "hellfire" as you worded it. While the picture is terrific, are there any 'real life' options? If not, then that's fine too, but have a look around if you haven't already. [@Siber] Very nice. This is the caliber I was looking for—great comeback. I have just one tiny thing to comment on, which is a lore thing. You wrote this: "back when the UDF was pairing Archons and Human soldiers together". Did you mean to say "Aeons and human soldiers"? That was and still is the primary means of doing things in the UDF. They have Aeons lead groups of human soldiers wherever possible, but Archons do not meddle with human affairs in this sense. Archons are more likely to disrupt human efforts or interact with them on a very personal one-on-one basis. Also, the picture—great choice, although a bit low resolution. Did you look for a 'real life' option? If you still want the metal arm sleeve to be visible, we can include a separate picture of concept art, just like [@Archangel89] has a separate image for his character's weapon. --- Tagging the rest of you here: [@RezonanceV][@Martian][@Krash][@FollowthePath] I've generated a world map using some site, which was kind of neat. I've added a black band across the whole thing to indicate the comet's orbit. This will be the main war zone or 'dark zone' for the conflict, you could also call it 'the scar' or something like that. So, those of you who created locations, look at the map and determine where they would be, so that I can add them there. [img]https://i.imgur.com/2TwD3Lx.jpg[/img] Direct link:https://i.imgur.com/2TwD3Lx.jpg