[quote=@MagratheanWhale]
I do like the effort put in!!  I would keep in mind for all intents and purposes, magic and the knowledge of its existence is very much an unknown.  Would there be people who believe in magic and search for clues?  Yeah of course!  I don’t think the order as it stands would work per se. 
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Oh, maybe I should have elaborated, I was thinking the Holy Order is just a ordinary religious order, and what Gwyndolin is supposed to be doing is evangelising and spreading the First Flame's warmth. The magic is something she does in secret and is somewhat reluctant to share with the rest of her kinsmen on account of rumours about the The Holy Order's involvement in witch hunting.

[quote=@MagratheanWhale]
As well, it’s important to remember that everyone’s powers will be very minimal at first!  You can grown into those powers, and eventually exceeded them, but your fire magic will be limited to start!!

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I don't know what kind of power curve you're going for yet but maybe if I explained my spells it would help.

Ignis - Make the flame jump a short distance, little further than she could by swinging the lantern
Luminosis - Make the lantern brighter
Cauter - Make the flame hotter for an instant

[quote=@MagratheanWhale]
 keep in mind these characters are from the modern world
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Ah, the setting is not what I thought it was. I thought it was a fantasy setting. Can I get a clarification on this? Clarification recieved.

I'll start work on a CS as I rework the character, if thats ok. :)