[color=9f9f9f]If you're not mentioned here and you've already posted your CS above, then your sheet needs no changes.

[@Theyra] Your addition of drones is great and I may have some things to work out with you in the future if accepted that will help the start of the story. The only thing I have to point out is the library. I'm being strict on the information available on Benders from after the war that attempt to paint Benders in any kind of positive light. The family's library is located in the Upper Ring (is that where it's located?) and information possessed here would lean severely in favor of the Republic rather than Benders. Everything pre-war or pushing Bending agenda would have been thoroughly searched for and destroyed in this ring as there are less cracks for information to fall through. So learned history in this area may leave Reman feeling differently.

However, if you still want him to feel the way he does about Benders, it [i]is[/i] possible, but that sentiment would have to be reached another way. One possible solution is that his family [i]does[/i] have books before the war, but then you'd have to ask yourself why they hid them and how.

Not that this is the case or that he needs to act a certain way because of his profession, but also consider that he is in the drone business and one of their biggest buyers might be the RSF, purchasing replacements and ordering maintenance on the drones they've bought from Xuoshi Enterprises.. that they use to hunt Benders in the Wild.

[@trenenp] Good additions of the fighting styles that I had failed to implement myself. I had forgotten about the martial art used by the Kyoshi Warriors so it's nice to see it being honored here.

However, there are a number of things we have to discuss. Changes to information which seems to be coming from a simple misunderstanding of the setting. I am more than willing to help of course.

A martial art associated with the Kyoshi Warriors who are associated with Avatar Kyoshi would not be allowed to be taught anywhere in the city. I'd treat this like bending. If the skill wanted to be mastered despite its regulation, then the first hurdle to clear would be the absence of any teachers or official knowledge on the subject. Of course Mayuki is also a bender and for balance purposes, the only character allowed to improve a martial art in this game will be a non-bender. I will allow Benders the basics of their real world counterparts for each element, ie. Tai Chi for Mayuki, but only after they've improved their bending form.

Continuing from this point, carrying weapons such as an iron fan folded into swords would be rather impractical, especially in the Upper Ring. There is no reason to be walking around armed to the teeth like this. If it helps, imagine it like walking outside with two swords on your hip and a bow staff in your hand. People would ask questions and maybe not politely. It would be less of an issue if it was better concealed, like a sword in a cane, but that again touches on a character's prowess in self defense.

Mayuki is allowed basic knowledge of a martial art that they can practice daily. It's by no means advanced, but will allow them to defend themselves if attacked or hold their ground in a one on one fight.

Moving forward, his jealousy of Benders doesn't entirely make sense to me. He is a Bender himself and if he isn't bending presently, in this world, Benders are very rare and are hunted and killed. What makes him jealous of this fact? And why does he hate the Republic? Given his status and where he lives, everything around him is telling him that the Republic is great and is providing everything he and his family needs. What makes him think differently? Remember that almost [i]everyone[/i] dislikes Benders. They're the reason for the state of the world.

Finally, the Jewelry alone could get your character killed immediately.

I know the above is a lot but I want to make sure everyone has a chance at getting in. If the setting confuses you, do let me know so I can try to get you on the same page.
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