[color=9f9f9f][@Dog] I like the fact that this is the very real result of what the Republic is creating and why I appreciate characters like this. I believe it is still a WIP? So far it's looking great and I can't wait to see it when its done. Other comments aside, if it were the final submission I would agree with sentiments on the "Who Are You?", but you've got three days worth of time to make [@KillamriX88] stop talking.

That being said, I actually don't talk enough so you're fine, Killamri. Just hold the comments until they're done.

[quote=@OddApproved]Oh, I can add more onto Mazu Soran. I'll add it into the extras really quickly, thank you! I was really feeling the Upper Ring or Underground while writing him as a character, I decided to go Upper class last minute. 
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That's my fault for not being very clear with some of my instructions, especially the NPC part and how much I wanted. I thought I knew exactly what I needed to start the game, especially after having run it before, but every time I do and people start coming through, new eyes tell me what I'm not seeing. Thanks for expanding on his lore!

[color=white]EDIT:[/color] I'm too damn slow with replies. Let me check it out Odd.

[color=white]EDIT 2:[/color] Looks good! Thanks for the addition!
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