[quote=@Chairman Bao]
My application!

[hider= Be Lao Hu, "White Tiger"]
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[color=6ecff6]Name:[/color] Be Lao Hu
[color=6ecff6]Titles:[/color] None
[color=6ecff6]Age:[/color] 35
[color=6ecff6]Rank:[/color] Second-class
[color=6ecff6]Allegiance:[/color] Neutral. Former member of the Blood Crow Clan (a Devil Clan) before the clan's destruction at the end of the war
[color=6ecff6]Appearance:[/color] As you can see, he is massive!
[color=6ecff6]Personality:[/color] 

Sociopathic - he has learned from an early age that there is no place for morality in living. At the same time, there is a place for the appearance of lawfulness and social altruism. 

Loyalty to family members - except he has no family members as all of his relatives are dead due to being exterminated at the end of the war

Vengeful - he wants to kill all the people who killed his family. His family was the blood crow clan (a Devil Clan). That is one of his primary missions: he wants to find out who ordered and carried out the murder of his family

Hallucinations - he hallucinates a lot of stuff!

Nightmares - he has a lot of nightmares of the war and dreams that are connected to his mission of vengeance

Yearns for blood sacrifice - as a former blood crow clan member, he is always seeking for blood so he can burn it in order to replenish his qi

[color=6ecff6]History:[/color]

During the war, he fought valiantly and bravely for his Blood Crow clan. His clan was once a very vital part of the Devil Clans Pact. Unfortunately, during a fateful mission, his family was deceived into attacking the enemy and was trapped and slaughtered. He was the only survivor. He will always remember seeing his mother and father burned alive. They told him to run away. "Avenge us!" they said. He was the only one quick enough to run away from the showers of arrows.

To this day, he aims to avenge the death of his family through whatever means he can find. 

[color=6ecff6]Other:[/color]

[color=6ecff6]Body Enhancements:[/color]

[color=6ecff6]Equipment:[/color]
He has a massive sword and a dagger that he uses on unsuspecting victims or lifestock.
[color=6ecff6]Cultivation Base:[/color]
As a former blood crow clan member, he needs blood in order to replenish his qi.
[color=6ecff6]Techniques:[/color]
He has the ability to turn blood into fire in order to replenish his qi by inhaling the smoke.
When he has enough Qi, he has the ability to augment his strength beyond his normal physical abilities. He becomes super fast and super strong, and can weather physical damage by healing wounds.
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My thoughts:
[hider=Thoughts]While hard revenge is a wuxia classic, I feel that Be Lao Hu feels a bit out of place. He feels more like he'd be an antagonistic force that's off doing his own thing rather than working alongside others. That does make it hard for me to write around and I'd prefer to not have the type of character that does this. Essentially, I'm fine with former devil clan members, but they'd have to be a character that's actively hiding rather than a hallucinating sociopathic murder machine.

It also doesn't really help that much of the character feels like a rough draft to cover bases rather than a full write up.[/hider]